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15 January 2009 @ 07:02 pm
A Celestial Legacy-Prologue  


 


In a courtroom, very far from our galaxy, an unfair trial was taking place.


“Today we gather here to commence sentencing for the crimes committed by Captain Celeste Vela. Captain Vela is accused of murder in the 1st degree. Captain Vela, how do you plead?”


Celeste looked up to address the Queen, “Not guilty, my Queen. As I've said before, you can not murder someone who is trying to kill you. I...”



“ENOUGH!” Screamed the Queen. “We have heard your lies for the last time."



"Commander Zeck what is your verdict?”



The queen had turned to her jury. Each one of them sat very still, not wanting the Queens' wrath upon their heads.



Commander Zeck stood and addressed the room. Celeste did not need to hear it to know what he was going to say.



“Guilty, My Queen.”



The Queen turned back to regard the Captain, a smile spread wide across her face. “Ahh, I see. Well then what should your punishment be?” She asked no one in particular. Everyone in the room knew better than to play the queen's guessing games.


She took several minutes, while several expressions crossed her face. The Queen took great pleasure in drawing out any kind of torture.


At last, she cleared her throat.


“I have thought upon this question for many nights, as I lay awake. You took from me, what no mother should lose."


"For that, I hereby banish you, Celeste Vela. You will never harm another here.”


Celeste looked up with a startled expression. “Banish? Banish me?!!!" Celeste looked into each of the faces before her to see if anyone would come to her aid. She could catch no one's eye.


The Queen's smile spread. “Well yes, my dear. I wish to never set eyes upon you again. I will have a ship take you far from here. Farther than we have ever gone. There, we will leave you. With no contact or means to ever come back home again.”


One of the fellow members of the council finally spoke, “But my Queen!”


The Queen whipped around. “ You dare question me, Melena? Do you stand with this MURDERER?!”


Melena averted her eyes to the floor, “No my Queen. Never.”


Celeste watched as her only ally and friend betrayed her.


The Queen turned back to Celeste, “I am not completely unfair, am I? I offer you another life. Would you rather I take your head? Or leave you in the Dungeons for the rest of your days?”



Her voice began to rise, “DO NOT temp me! How I would love to watch you suffer, as you must have done to my son!”


Tears began to fill Celeste's eyes. How she had loved Lanier. Loved him with all her heart and soul. But in the end, she had to take his life. She felt guilty. She must deserve this.


“I will offer you one thing tho,” The Queen spat. “ If you manage to survive, and breed a line of your own, your descendants may return. ONLY after 10 Generations.  Not a SECOND before."


"But you Celeste, may never .....EVER..... return home. If you set foot back on this planet, I will do what I wish with you."


And with that said, The Queen turned and marched out of the room.


Two guards approached the stand where Celeste was positioned. They looked at each other then at her.


“Lets go!” the one said.


“Go Where?” Celeste asked.

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Author's Note:

Hi All! Thank you for taking the time to read my first attempt at a plotty Legacy. As you might have guessed poor Celeste will be my founder to a 10 Generation Legacy.
I'd like to give thanks to all those wonderful CC creators. I have no talent what so ever in creating things, and I found some awesome stuff around to help me build this set. Most everything you've seen has come from MTS2. If anyone would like some links or credit for these creations, let me know, and I'll post some links!
 

I'd love to get any kinda of feedback. Please just leave me a comment!

 


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( 37 comments — Post a new comment )
puddinroy[info]puddinroy on January 16th, 2009 01:30 am (UTC)
Great proloque. I can't wait to see what happens. I like the whole set up. Good job!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! :D
Carey-Anne[info]pearkiwi on January 16th, 2009 01:33 am (UTC)
I *heart* story legacies, and yours looks really interesting so far. I will definitely keep an eye out for updates.
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it ;)
Jessica Ready Forbes[info]angelique5666 on January 16th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
Very interesting start so far. I can't wait to see what comes next!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:26 pm (UTC)
You and me both! ;) Thanks!
Laura[info]laurademelza on January 16th, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
This was very nice and interesting. I can't wait to see what Celeste does with her fate. ^^
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:26 pm (UTC)
I'm alitle unsure of that myself. I've had this idea in my head for a while now, just now decided to give it life. Thanks for commenting!
Jules[info]julessims on January 16th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
This is really good! I can't wait to see what happens next.
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ~~~
Jessica[info]jessiewings on January 16th, 2009 02:29 pm (UTC)
Ooh, this has intrigued me. I think you've set the stage for an amazing story. I look forward to see what you do with this! :)
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you. *blush* I really appreciate all these comments.
Kathryn: pic#77190623[info]move_objectson on January 16th, 2009 03:04 pm (UTC)
Awesome prologue!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
Louisa.[info]luu_xx on January 16th, 2009 05:11 pm (UTC)
Wow.
Love it.
I'm looking forward to reading more! :]
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 16th, 2009 07:28 pm (UTC)
Thankies! *love your girl in your avatar* Thats one of my fave outfits in the game. ;)
brightblacksims[info]brightblacksims on January 17th, 2009 11:28 pm (UTC)
Wow, I really like the story! I'm definitely interested in the updates to come. =)
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 18th, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
DebC: sims 2 - patricia wan[info]debc on January 18th, 2009 11:12 pm (UTC)
I just stumbled upon this from my flist and had to stop in and say how wonderful it is! I'm off to read the next chapter, but I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed your prologue. :-)
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
bubbs72[info]bubbs72 on January 18th, 2009 11:30 pm (UTC)
Love your first entry! Debc pimped you out on a forum I visit and I came to read. Now I've got to follow this!

Love the skins you used also.

~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 07:31 pm (UTC)
What forum? I'd like to go see whats going on>
thank you for letting me know!
I got most of the skins from MTS2.
Enayla is the creator. She has awesome skins!
Thanks again for commenting:)
Angelia[info]anjelstar76 on January 19th, 2009 07:44 pm (UTC)
It's actually a private forum (I'm also a member of it with DebC and bubbs72). :O)
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 08:04 pm (UTC)
Awww I see. ;)
moonstone_myth[info]moonstone_myth on January 18th, 2009 11:38 pm (UTC)
Poor Celeste, it sounds like she has had a hard time. I love your picture skills btw.
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 07:39 pm (UTC)
Celeste I think has had it rough, but she's also had lots of happy times leading up to the whole "havin to kill someone". Hopefully will be doing some flashbacks to show her life before now.
thanks for the comment!
ceeceemee[info]ceeceemee on January 19th, 2009 12:53 am (UTC)
Nice setup. I liked your use of skins and backgrounds to portray a different world than our own. I also like that you used various skins. Well done.
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 07:38 pm (UTC)
thanks so much :)
moonshadowed[info]moonshadowed on January 19th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC)
I can only echo what was already said... nice job. WOW! If you do this well with the prologue, I can only guess what sort of fun the rest of it will be!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 07:38 pm (UTC)
I appreciate the echo all the same! :)
Angelia[info]anjelstar76 on January 19th, 2009 01:29 pm (UTC)
*sniffles* Poor Celeste!!! :O((( She loved someone, but then had to kill him ... cuz he was trying to kill her for whatever reason. Do we get to discover why in any sort of flashback? I can't wait to see what the SimWorld has in store for our banish-ee. GREAT start!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 07:37 pm (UTC)
I'm actually working on that right now. I'm having a bit of trouble deciding which way I want it to go. But the flashback should be chapter 1.1 or 1.2 ;)
Thank you! :)
Angelia[info]anjelstar76 on January 19th, 2009 07:42 pm (UTC)
Weeee!! Looking forward to it! :O)
petalbrook[info]petalbrook on January 19th, 2009 02:21 pm (UTC)
Hi. *waves* I'm another of DebC's pimpees. I love your alien set. I'm excited to see what happens with Celeste in her new home.
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 19th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
HI! It took a bit to put the alien set together. I actually built the original Courtroom on a community lot thinking it would be easier. But then none of my pose boxes showed up to buy. So I ended up rebuilding it as a residential, and having the jury live there. Worked out tho :)
Thanks so much!
bonyknees[info]bonyknees on January 23rd, 2009 01:21 am (UTC)
For some odd reason..
I can't read the next chapter. Like it got lost.
Makes me sad because I love it already!
~*Traci*~[info]traciandrus on January 23rd, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC)
Re: For some odd reason..
Thats weird. I just checked and everything is ok.
Maybe try the links again. ?
Thanks for reading :)